You Can't Escape Destiny

Right, this is a deck I've wanted to build for some time now.

this is a first-draft deck recipie, what do you guys think?

It Will Be a 45 Card Deck

Monsters (10):

3x Dekoichi The Battle Chanted Locomotive
2x Arcana Force 0 - The Fool
1x Marshmallon
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Il Cat Of Omen
1x Mask Of Darkness
1x Hamon, Lord Of Striking Thunder

Spells (23):

3x Spirit Message "I"
3x Spirit Message "N"
3x Spirit Message "A"
3x Spirit Message "L"
3x Book Of Moon
3x Book Of Eclipse
2x Twister
1x Scapegoat
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Level Limit - Area B

Traps (12):

3x Destiny Board
3x Dark Bribe
3x Thretening Roar
1x Solemn Judgement
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Mirror Force

So, Any Thoughts/Recomendations?

Starlight road? maybe it is too situational but it could be useful against heavy storm or anything they side to do max s/t destruction

it's an idea, but they have to try pop 2 of my things, meaning it doesn't stop MST...

I think I'll give it a miss

Allure to add to the draw power maybe?

hmmm, another good idea, might put one in, just hte only reason I would need draw-power is to get to my stall faster...

Magical Mallet might be goos thinking about it - as this thing would dead-draw lots

Might add an Allure, 3 Mallets and a Card Trader

making it a 50 Card deck

what you think?

no don't do that Magical Mallet is a bad card giving you a -1 everytime, also your deck is big enough as it is if you increase it to 50 then what is the point of adding one card that can let you draw 2 cards from your deck if you are planning to add 5, that will not help the speed of the deck to get its win condition

Consider A Sanctuary in the Sky and Gellenduos?
quite a good wall which doesn't take up s/t space

btw, you can't activate spirit messages from your hand, meaning you will have a fair few dead draws. Just dropping that in if you didn't already know

what is gellenduos effect?

and I might add a sancuory - stops peircing, , nice idea man, and I know that it will dead-draw, why I might add magical mallets

Gellenduo can't be destroyed by battle but is destroyed when you suffer damage. Hence Sanctuary, a playset of each is definitely worth consideration. Also I don't think maximum of spirit messages is needed, that's 12 cards that are dead draws; see my point?

yeah, once I've built it up, I'll consider dropping 1 of each message for the gellenduo+sanctuary, see how it runs with 2 of each message and 3 of each.

-1 Torrential Tribute
+1 Hand Destruction/Card Destruction

You may want to refresh your hand in the very possible starting hand of 5 spirit messages. I'd go with the Card Destruction personally. After all you can afford to ditch some messages.